David, great second round. Looks complete. I cannot read the fine print in your spreadsheet, so I'm missing probabaly some of the refinements that are not in the broad-stroke narrative. I would like to see some of the program elements (dorm, lounge, cave, et cetera) discribed in more detail. I like the touch of the photos, and hope you can add them as real ideas within your program (not literally, but transformed to your interpretation of the program)
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David, great second round. Looks complete. I cannot read the fine print in your spreadsheet, so I'm missing probabaly some of the refinements that are not in the broad-stroke narrative. I would like to see some of the program elements (dorm, lounge, cave, et cetera) discribed in more detail. I like the touch of the photos, and hope you can add them as real ideas within your program (not literally, but transformed to your interpretation of the program)
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